Dear Matan,

Today we did the second part of the email workshop.

Remember: No slang, abbreviations, spelling, smileys.

Flow: may need commas, length of sentences.

Tone: who are you talking to, formal? informal?

Today we spoke about settlements. We discussed how there needs to be a clear definition of what will be apart of the future Israel and what will be on the other side of the line. There is major confusion about what is part of Israel and what was part of Israel before the war.

Corrections-

Incorrect- We refer all settlements as one.

Correct- We refer to all the settlements as one.

Incorrect- This what happens.

Correct- This is what happens.

Incorrect- Everybody look at this line like it was something holy.
Correct- Everybody looked at this line like it was something holy.

Incorrect- The Jordanians execute some Israelis that were there.
Correct- The Jordanians executed some Israelis that were there.