Dear Matan,
Today we did the first part of the email workshop.
Structure:
Introduction- opening sentence to discuss the topic of the email, introduce the sender if it is a first email.
Body- give the necessary details concerning the matter at hand.
Conclusion- final request, question, statement which requires an action on behalf of the receiver of the email.
Phrases to use:
Introductory phrases:
"With regards to our conversation.."
" I am writing to confirm..."
Initiating contact with someone new:
"Please may I introduce myself..."
"Having seen your advertisement in..."
Asking someone to take an action:
" I would appreciate your help in this matter"
"Would you be able to.."
Asking for a swift reply:
"Hoping to hear from you soon"
Chasing up a reply:
"Hoping to hear from you regarding.."
" In reference to my email of..."
Closing phrases:
"Thank you for your time and prompt attention."
" Many thanks again for your time."
Today we spoke about your brothers Henna party and how it was such a different culture but really enjoyable.You told me about your promotion as a senior officer and how it is now more responsibility but worth the hard work.
Corrections-
Incorrect- He spit it out immediately.
Correct- He spat it out immediately.
Incorrect- My brother is getting married with a Morrocon girl.
Correct- My brother is getting married to a Morrocon girl.
fiance- a man or woman who is engaged to be married.
My brothers fiance is Morrocon.
kitted out- the whole outfit.
My mother was all kitted out for the event.