Shalom Eran,

I hope that you are having a great holiday. I have received the final revision of my paper from Karin, and I have made the last corrections. She has cleared it for submission.

I do not know the process for final submission, and I think that Karin expects to receive the final paper submission from Mabal in order for her to then mark it (as per her e-mail below). Let me know if I need to send the paper to someone else.

Cheers!

Pat

De : Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il>
Envoyé : 21 avril 2019 11:50
À : 'Patrick Lemyre'
Objet : RE: Patrick Lemyre (Mabal - INDC 46) - Paper Draft no 1 for review - 31 Mar 2019

Dear Patrick

I read the paper. The corrected version is more focused and comprehensive.

I have a minor editing comment: It is best you align the main text to both right and left margins.

Good luck in the submission process

I believe it will be sent to me for final evaluation

All the best

karin

פרופ' קארין אמית

ראש התכנית לתואר שני בהגירה ושילוב חברתי

חברת סגל במחלקה למנהל עסקים וחוקרת במכון להגירה ושילוב חברתי

טל: 09-8983851 נייד: 052-8396334 | פקס: 09-8983860

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Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

Head of the MA program of Immigration & Social Integration

Member of the department of Business Administration

Researcher at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration

Ruppin Academic Center, Israel

Tel: 972-9-8983851 | Fax: 972-9-8983860

From: Patrick Lemyre [mailto:patlemyre@hotmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, April 16, 2019 3:46 PM
To: Karin Amit
Subject: Re: Patrick Lemyre (Mabal - INDC 46) - Paper Draft no 1 for review - 31 Mar 2019

Shalom Karin!

I hope that you are well. I have made the corrections to the paper and I have included the latest version. Let me know if it makes the cut, and if I need to make additional mods.

Thanks for your help and support so far!

Patrick

De : Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il>
Envoyé : 3 avril 2019 14:24
À : 'Patrick Lemyre'
Objet : RE: Patrick Lemyre (Mabal - INDC 46) - Paper Draft no 1 for review - 31 Mar 2019

Dear Patrick

I read your paper.

It looks like you have put a lot of effort in your work.

I'm attaching my comments (stickers on the pdf file).

Most of my comments are related to the first part of your paper (until page 40)

I think this part is too detailed and too long. You should focus the paper on your main theme (which is not clear enough)

Some of the sections can appear in an appendix (figures and definition) in order to comply with an academic paper format.

All the best

Karin

פרופ' קארין אמית

ראש התכנית לתואר שני בהגירה ושילוב חברתי

חברת סגל במחלקה למנהל עסקים וחוקרת במכון להגירה ושילוב חברתי

טל: 09-8983851 נייד: 052-8396334 | פקס: 09-8983860

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Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

Head of the MA program of Immigration & Social Integration

Member of the department of Business Administration

Researcher at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration

Ruppin Academic Center, Israel

Tel: 972-9-8983851 | Fax: 972-9-8983860

From: Patrick Lemyre [mailto:patlemyre@hotmail.com]
Sent: Sunday, March 31, 2019 6:55 PM
To: Karin Amit
Subject: Patrick Lemyre (Mabal - INDC 46) - Paper Draft no 1 for review - 31 Mar 2019

Shalom Karin,

My draft no 1 is attached for your review and inputs!

Looking forward to your inputs and discussion.

Take care!

Patrick

De : Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il>
Envoyé : 15 mars 2019 10:00
À : Patrick Lemyre
Objet : Re: Paper progressing well

Dear Patrick

I’m happy you are progressing with your paper. I’ll gladly review the first draft and meet you at Ruppin.

Have a nice weekend

Karin

Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

The Department of Business Administration & The Institute for Immigration & Social integration

Ruppin Academic Center

נשלח מה-iPhone שלי

‫ב-15 במרץ 2019, בשעה 10:45, ‏‏Patrick Lemyre ‏<patlemyre@hotmail.com> כתב/ה:

Shalom Karin,

I hope that you are well. I am now in the process of rewriting my introduction, and writing my conclusion. I should be done with the first draft in about 2 weeks, and will forward to you soon.

Concerning the French immigration issues and their resulting ghettos, as you have suggested, I have kept it in the paper. It actually fits well in my comparison of Canadian multiculturalism and Québec's interculturalism, as it shows the negativity that can emerge from a system which asks immigrants to push their culture aside. Again, thanks for the idea.

Once I will send you my draft, I will wait for your suggestion for a meeting date/time. I will be more than happy to travel to the Ruppin Academic Center as last time.

Take care!

Patrick

De : Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il>
Envoyé : 16 février 2019 02:00
À : 'Patrick Lemyre'
Objet : RE: Paper progressing well

Dear Patrick

Thank you for the update.

I'm happy to hear that you are progressing in your work.

The focus on Canadian's immigration policies looks promising and I'm glad you followed my suggestion.

As you wrote, the comparison to the French case is not necessary. I think you should mention it in the background but without analyzing it in to details.

I look forward to getting the first draft of your paper

All the best

Karin

פרופ' קארין אמית

ראש התכנית לתואר שני בהגירה ושילוב חברתי

חברת סגל במחלקה למנהל עסקים וחוקרת במכון להגירה ושילוב חברתי

טל: 09-8983851 נייד: 052-8396334 | פקס: 09-8983860

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Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

Head of the MA program of Immigration & Social Integration

Member of the department of Business Administration

Researcher at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration

Ruppin Academic Center, Israel

Tel: 972-9-8983851 | Fax: 972-9-8983860

From: Patrick Lemyre [mailto:patlemyre@hotmail.com]
Sent: Friday, February 15, 2019 11:40 AM
To: Karin Amit
Subject: Paper progressing well

Hello Karin, I hope that this e-mail finds you well.

I am just sending you a quick note to let you know that my paper is progressing well. I am very happy with how it is shaping up!

Also, as I was reading through the reference material you have provided me and dug some more in the same direction, my paper has also evolved into something more focused on the varying faces of discrimination in Canada's immigration policies, and their evolution over the years, and of the diverging immigration policies between Québec and Canada (in the end, as you have suggested).

More specifically, my paper is now covering the integration processes of multiculturalism and interculturalism, the origins and the duality between Québec's approach to immigration policies and the rest of Canada, the initial presence of racial discrimination in their respective policies, and the National Security potential blind spot created by these different approaches to immigration. In the end, I am trying to show that Canada's immigration policies were not always perfect and still have challenges, including the diverging approach from Québec, despite today's perception of Canada as a welcoming country, and I am trying to show that Canada's immigration policy and laws are well built in order to preserve its National Security.

As I was progressing, I have determined that the comparison with France's immigration policies have become irrelevant, having more than enough material with Armony and Berry's respective work and the Canada versus Québec angle, and as such, I have decided to drop this part.

I am aiming at sending you the first draft by mid-April (maybe earlier). I hope that this is ok, let me know.

Patrick

De : Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il>
Envoyé : 2 janvier 2019 03:50
À : 'Patrick Lemyre'
Objet : RE: Annual Paper Adviser

Great I'm at the office

Karin

פרופ' קארין אמית

ראש התכנית לתואר שני בהגירה ושילוב חברתי

חברת סגל במחלקה למנהל עסקים וחוקרת במכון להגירה ושילוב חברתי

טל: 09-8983851 נייד: 052-8396334 | פקס: 09-8983860

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Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

Head of the MA program of Immigration & Social Integration

Member of the department of Business Administration

Researcher at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration

Ruppin Academic Center, Israel

Tel: 972-9-8983851 | Fax: 972-9-8983860

From: Patrick Lemyre [mailto:patlemyre@hotmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, January 02, 2019 10:50 AM
To: Karin Amit
Subject: Re: Annual Paper Adviser

Hi Karin, I have arrived. I am walking towards bulding 4 now. See you in a minute.

Patrick

Envoyé de mon iPhone

Le 21 déc. 2018 à 08:02, Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il> a écrit :

Thank you

I will go over the paper and discuss it with you on our meeting

Karin

פרופ' קארין אמית

ראש התכנית לתואר שני בהגירה ושילוב חברתי

חברת סגל במחלקה למנהל עסקים וחוקרת במכון להגירה ושילוב חברתי

טל: 09-8983851 נייד: 052-8396334 | פקס: 09-8983860

<image002.jpg>

Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

Head of the MA program of Immigration & Social Integration

Member of the department of Business Administration

Researcher at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration

Ruppin Academic Center, Israel

Tel: 972-9-8983851 | Fax: 972-9-8983860

From: Patrick Lemyre [mailto:patlemyre@hotmail.com]
Sent: Thursday, December 20, 2018 11:17 PM
To: Karin Amit
Subject: RE: Annual Paper Adviser

Hi Karin,

Perfect! See you there. I will arrive by car; my full name and licence plate number are:

Patrick Lemyre

car licence 33-789-34

I have attached a rough draft of the intro to my paper which explains some context, also the areas that I would like to research, and the structure of the paper. If you think that I am aiming too high, do not hesitate to narrow my field of research or comparison of Canada, the US, and Germany (considering that I have essentially three months to conduct this research, while attending a full weekly schedule of classes). I could probably just focus on Canada and the US, or Canada and Germany.

Looking forward to meet you, and to benefit from your experience and knowledge of immigration.

Have a good night,

Pat

De : Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il>
Envoyé : 20 décembre 2018 02:47
À : 'Patrick Lemyre'
Cc : ענת שטרן
Objet : RE: Annual Paper Adviser

OK, so we will meet on January 2 at 11:00 at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration (building no 4) at Ruppin Academic Center

If you plan to arrive by car please let me know and I will arrange your entrance via the main entrance

Happy New Year

Karin

פרופ' קארין אמית

ראש התכנית לתואר שני בהגירה ושילוב חברתי

חברת סגל במחלקה למנהל עסקים וחוקרת במכון להגירה ושילוב חברתי

טל: 09-8983851 נייד: 052-8396334 | פקס: 09-8983860

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Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

Head of the MA program of Immigration & Social Integration

Member of the department of Business Administration

Researcher at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration

Ruppin Academic Center, Israel

Tel: 972-9-8983851 | Fax: 972-9-8983860

From: Patrick Lemyre [mailto:patlemyre@hotmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, December 19, 2018 9:04 PM
To: Karin Amit
Cc: ענת שטרן
Subject: Re: Annual Paper Adviser

Hello Karin, toda for your understanding, it is much appreciated. 2 Jan is perfect! I'll send the required documents ahead of time. See you then.

Have a great evening!

Pat

Envoyé de mon iPhone

Le 19 déc. 2018 à 19:26, Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il> a écrit :

Hi Patrick

No problem. I can meet you at Ruppin on the following dates:

January 2 from 11:00-13:00

January 8 11:00-13:00

January 9 11:00-13:00

Best

Karin

פרופ' קארין אמית

ראש התכנית לתואר שני בהגירה ושילוב חברתי

חברת סגל במחלקה למנהל עסקים וחוקרת במכון להגירה ושילוב חברתי

טל: 09-8983851 נייד: 052-8396334 | פקס: 09-8983860

<image002.jpg>

Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

Head of the MA program of Immigration & Social Integration

Member of the department of Business Administration

Researcher at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration

Ruppin Academic Center, Israel

Tel: 972-9-8983851 | Fax: 972-9-8983860

From: Patrick Lemyre [mailto:patlemyre@hotmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, December 18, 2018 6:00 PM
To: Karin Amit
Cc: ענת שטרן
Subject: Re: Annual Paper Adviser

Hello Karin, thanks for responding so quickly. I can meet you at Netanya no problem, or at another location, whatever is convenient for you. Unfortunately, i can't next week as I am in a vacation with my family. I can from 2 January on though; my apologies for not being available next week. Let me know when and where in January please.

In the meantime, I will send you my revised research proposal, a draft intro for the paper, and what was provided as the course curriculum, related to the paper.

Have a good evening,

Pat

Envoyé de mon iPhone

Le 18 déc. 2018 à 12:30, Karin Amit <karina@ruppin.ac.il> a écrit :

Dear Patrick

It will be great if we can schedule at a meeting in the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration at Ruppin Academic Center (it is located not far from Netanya)

I'm at Ruppin from Sunday to Wednesday

Available dates next week are:

23/12 at 12:00

24/12 at 10:30 or 13:30

25/12 at 10:00

26/12 at 10:00-13:00

Before we meet please send me the seminar syllabus

Best

karin

פרופ' קארין אמית

ראש התכנית לתואר שני בהגירה ושילוב חברתי

חברת סגל במחלקה למנהל עסקים וחוקרת במכון להגירה ושילוב חברתי

טל: 09-8983851 נייד: 052-8396334 | פקס: 09-8983860

<image003.jpg>

Prof. Karin Amit, Ph.D

Head of the MA program of Immigration & Social Integration

Member of the department of Business Administration

Researcher at the Institute for Immigration & Social Integration

Ruppin Academic Center, Israel

Tel: 972-9-8983851 | Fax: 972-9-8983860

From: Patrick Lemyre [mailto:patlemyre@hotmail.com]
Sent: Monday, December 17, 2018 4:30 PM
To: ענת שטרן
Cc: Karin Amit
Subject: Re: Annual Paper Adviser

Anat, this is great! Thanks for your help.

Prof Amit, I am looking forward to meet you. Let me know where and when we could meet.

Have a good evening,

Pat Lemyre

INDC 46

Mabal

Envoyé de mon iPhone

Le 17 déc. 2018 à 12:55, ענת שטרן <anatstern1@gmail.com> a écrit :

Dear Pat,

I'm happy to update that Prof Karine Amit (copied to this email) has agreed to supervise your Israel National Defense College Annual paper. Prof Amit specializes in immigration policies and has researched many aspects of immigration both to Israel and in other places. i am sure that will have a lot to learn from her. Please contact Prof Amit to schedule a meeting so you can start your learning journey

Best

Anat

Anat Stern Ph.D

Head of Research

Israel National Defense College

anatstern1@gmail.com
+972-54-4402885

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